On Fri, Mar 25, 2011 at 02:21:29PM +0300, Alexander Gladysh wrote:
> "This MIT-licensed Lua module binds hiredis[1] C client library for
> Redis[2] server."
>
> Please tell me how can I improve above sentence to match this guideline.
>
> It is a Redis client library. I do not know how to explain it clearer, sorry.
>
> Please, *please*, do explain your concerns clearer. And do not overquote.
I believe the request is for an additional bit along the lines of:
Redis is a network-attached "data structure" server capable of storing strings,
hashes, lists, sets etc.
Because currently, to someone who knows nothing about what Redis actually is,
your announcement reads like:
This MIT-licensed Lua module binds FOOBLEJAM[1] C client library for
GRUNDLEBURGER[2] server.
You can therefore understand the confusion :-)
D.
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